Black Poetry : Laying It Down

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Laying It Down

    Like a fake rap game the type that make yap lame,
    Must repair stonework make microphone perk and flame
    Strike a match ignite a batch fire and desire like Rick James
    And Tina Marie get meaner with a spree of rhymes and fame
    Change my name feel strange when I’m the blame
    Like a lion of iron it’s plain laws grow tame claws
    Rip through trees like chain saws my slang hit jaws
    Bold in defiance hold an alliance to rip verse
    Use sex science kiss girls lips strip of slips and rehearse
    Got a chance to speak and enhance the street
    Advance with heat habitat political and combat critical
    Tote a gat type individual promote a stat so physical
    Find souls, Align goals potential like Prudential with
    Essential cash got a piece of the rock get a mental whiff
    Tough like stainless steel with a ruff painless deal
    The nameless squeal and the shameless yield
    Unravel the gravel on roads like a jackhammer
    Babble clout, travel routes read codes use whack grammar
    Smack cats from Alabama my flavor attract glamour
    Despite the contrary fight and bury bones like dogs
    Excite and write like a secretary verse ignite clogs
    Your brain light fire logs for flame appetite for eggnogs
    Reproduce sound put a hangman noose on a clown
    Loose ends bound like a truce to cease-fire downtown
    Raise sheep and let em graze deep in fields of green
    Deals with teams

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AND I SHO LIKE YO FLOW...

    MADRAPPER, HOUSE TAPPER, SHOW STOPPER
    FLOOR DROPPER, MAKE THE WEAK FALL TO
    THEY KNEE'S, MAKE THE STRONG REACH FOR
    THEY TREE'S! MENTAL WHEELS OF CREATION
    TURNING. FOR MORE OF THIS FLO WE BE
    YEARNIN! KEEP IT COMIN! PEACE AND PROSPERITY!
     
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    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very good read!!!!!!!
     
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    Madd.......

    Keep on layin it down.

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    say it say it say it !!!!!

    speaketh from da mic .......Madd
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    msluciousb thanks for the poem, WindWalker thanks for responding for real, epiphany thanks for your comments, $$RICH$$ the supermoderator it's always a pleasure to read yours
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YA WELCOME!

    JUST LETTIN YA KNOW THAT YOUR FLOW IS ON POINT.
    AND WORKING LIKE THAT YOU WILL BLOW UP A JOINT!
     
  8. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    msluciousb THAT'STHE BEST RHYME i'VE SEEN YOU WRITE FOR REAL NICE
     
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