Black Poetry : Layin it Down

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Layin it Down

    After pay adjustments still couldn’t thrust rent at
    The landlord my plan void paycheck stay wrecked rats
    In the building and with that I’m chilling being a brat
    Lust is corrupt me and my girl busted up one day a phat
    Booty caught my eyes fought the vibes couldn’t started
    To lay down and play around have sex but was out smarted
    To my girl I rap wise but started to capsize like a boat using
    Them I love you type quotes girlfriend suspected I was abusing
    Her trust founded out major behavior can ruin your chance
    For a romance and enhance the chance for a disvorce by force
    My head spin after a deadly sin girl let me back on the course
    Of this crazy marriage we already have a baby carriage a bouncing
    Baby boy, so judge I want her back if she’ll have me I’m renouncing
    This playboy life please boo be my wife forgive me start training
    My vicous habit even a suspicious rabbit eat a carrot still remaining
    Thug in the news mud adheres to my shoes it’s raining
    To much complaining in search for answers in maintaining
    My peace, feast on cornflakes atleast not a born fake because
    My bowl of cereal hold material such as bananas let me pause
    Straighten up my bandana in the manner a thug would do traveling
     
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    You appeared to have layed it down heavy enough, I'm betting she will re-conciter :toast:
     
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    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queentswana THANKS FOR THE REPLY FOR REAL
     
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