Black Poetry : Lay your Heart in My Soul...Inspired by Nia's Come, Lay your Head on my Pillow

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  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sense of longing
    As I peer into possibilities
    Of you and I
    Creating and shaping destiny
    To our own design
    Moving in time
    To a place
    Where there are no others except
    Us


    Free to paint portraits
    With our hearts
    And create new worlds
    With our passion
    We flow in destiny’s inkwell
    Composing
    Scribes for all to behold
    Come lay your heart in my soul

    We proclaim
    And exclaim
    Our union
    In
    Intimate liaisons
    As your heart
    Is baptized in the
    River of my soul
    Intermingling
    As my soul seeps through
    Heart linings
    Through symbiotic
    Metamorphosis we
    Change


    Our destiny
    No longer separated
    But one
    In flesh and spirit
    Unison
    In song
    United
    In
    Lyrical and xtasy filled
    Intercourse
    Hear
    My plea
    As I call unto thee
    And offer you my soul
    For you to rest your heart within.
     
  2. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know I don't deserve the credit for this Masterpeace

    Whew! Very breathtaking, Poet Bishop. And what a concept you generated as a twist. Magnificent.

    Rated: :spinstar::spinstar::spinstar::spinstar::spinstar:
     
  3. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You laid the groundwork I just flowed with it in my own special way.....thanks for the inspiration.:cool:
     
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    Soft, yet powerful, and oh so sensual...

    enjoyed!

    ~Shani:)
     
  5. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Shani for the read.
     
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    Bishop!

    Bruh you stay inspired!!! I dig that... very consistent!

    Real Respect
    Reas
     
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    oh ****....this is so beautiful! you must slay the ladies!! :)
     
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this stuff is steaming!....

    lo'
     
  9. Bishop

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    Thanks...
     
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    Bishop... U know that I'm always feeling what you write Poet...
    Marvelous as always love....
    I will be looking for more from ya'
    I see that lighthouse... I won't forget the invite...
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