Black Poetry : Lay It Down

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lay It Down

    My financial position has caused me friction
    Put me restriction and drug addiction without thug recognition
    So I grab ammnunition but in my vocab make a transition
    Spit deft clout with self-doubt left without saying good-bye
    The hood fry with my lyrics like fish in grease wish this would cease
    Should increase my output but I’ll have to fight the beast
    Tonight bring me a knife has to take his life to bring peace
    On the edge of purity plagued by insecurity can’t feast
    Invincible flame came like insensible shame use soap
    On my condensable name try tame and clean up my hope
    I’m ill like the smoke from dope got a rope around
    Throat of cats trying to scope my game too heavy in pounds
    To tote the emotion and passions there’s an ocean of fashion
    Like FUBU, fed ration to mouths endowed with the feeling of sensation
    Dealing with administration and kneeling to verses of penetration
    Stealing information revealing it to the public after concentration
    Like newspapers and magazine’s headlines, it bedtime for a nation
    Insert knowledge into text work the garbage so complex, vexed
    Are those like salesclerks that fail to perk rhymes that are perplex
    Beaware of a block that share stock don’t care but I’m shock
    Like Prudential need a piece of the residential rock

    MADDRAPPER PEACE
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man most def ya one of a kind dat vibe & scribe in rappin
    blast dat keep me mazed as a fan of yours .......Tyght hit
    from da MADD PRODUCTIONAL bliss
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo i can't front dun
    you laced dis

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  4. poeticdelight

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    ahahahah

    MADD this was tight!

    i liked everything to the last line

    you go :)

    pd :toast:
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $RICH$$, Da Street So'ja AND poeticdelight THANKS FOR RESPONDING YALL MADE MY DAY REALLY APPRECIATE THIS FOR REAL YALL
     
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