Black Poetry : 'lay day'

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can feel the presence of sun beams and mild breezes reflect from the windows to our rather sweet awakening in one another's warmth
    i don't know what it is about this thursday morning that has me lying here past nine a.m with you laidback.
    then again

    it's seven, it's heaven

    surrounding sounds of light jazz welcome the mood of this day, our day we call ' lay day'

    no work no school no phone calls, etc...
    this day only is em(her)gent

    i think to self "oh my God she looks sexy so sexy even in my blue silk robe" with nothing underneathe relaxin' in these silk blue boxers i'm lying in...

    "how are you finding queen?"
    she smiled, snuggling her soft femininity against me.
    her head is the pillow of comfort that lies on my chest as she gently strokes her fingers on the side of my face to a state of
    serenity
    she doesn't know it's the little things..
    i rest then in her sensitivity compelled to ask
    "what shall i make you for breakfast??"

    "anything" she whispered

    *on my way to the fridge thinking hmmm.. it's a strawberry whip cream morning*

    returning to find the blue silk robe on the floor with her sitting up with remote in hand
    "let's watch a movie" she said patting my spot beside her as she slumps and cuddles in my arms

    i'm down with it

    "wait, you want some lemon tea??" she asked

    "no i'm tyte. here try one of these baby girl. match play"
    we lay
     
  2. Joyce

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    Been there...done that. Rare moments when the kids don't wake you up...wanting breakfast too. Beautiful painting J'hiah.
     
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    j'hiah

    I see 'serenity'.....peaceful piece ~ love it j'hiah!


    N2
     
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    i like

    the simple things that make this joint so
    "feelable".
    thanx bruh.


    hw
     
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    lovely, j'hiah. peace and quiet with your sweetie is a good thang!

    dee ;)
     
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    NOTE TO SELF: CLOSE THE SHADES NEXT TIME I LOOK OVER INTO THE GARDEN :D ...

    tight scribe poet...you have penned love very well...Now y'all behave over there before i turn the hose one...

    jes' playin... :rolling:

    one.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Joyce,
    you know what to do. take'm to Big Ma's house :D
    thanx queen

    N2,
    the garden is just that queen, 'serenity'
    thanx for seeing me

    hi wa,
    feel me? thanx bruh.

    mizdee,
    errybody needs a lay day.
    thanx for the love.

    dnommo :lol:
    yo i wonder why you keep hoses in the garden.

    poetic delight,

    'play day' is next :wink:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed

    u pose love to perfection wit a smile
    do yo thang....indeed:heart: :D
     
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    JP.


    ...umm hmm! so dis why me & mama couldn't
    get you on the phone da otha day?!! :lol:

    lil brother of mine... this was simply divine...
    kinda reminded me of an easy Sunday mornin'
    you feelin' me? N E who! i love-did it!! :D

    NL:heart:
    ya sister!
     
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