Black Poetry : Laughing on the Inside

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  1. honeebrownsuga

    honeebrownsuga Active Member MEMBER

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    As you sway your hips while walking through
    She spots her man looking at you
    But while you’re thinking you’re so fly
    ‘Cause you caught her man’s eye
    She’s just laughin’ on the inside
    ‘Cause she knows that, if anything, you’ll merely be the chick on the side
    The chick that won’t get s***
    But a request to suck his d***
    ‘Cause she won’t do that s***
    Then maybe a decent ****
    With some barely sucks of the t***
    And a few bucks for kicks
    Followed by a swift kick
    With a “Hit the door trick,
    My girl’ll be home at 6
    And you ain’t worth me getting in no s***
    I love my woman, which you will never be
    You can’t do s*** for me
    But maybe fulfill a fantasy
    I, like any man, wants his cake and to eat it too
    But I ain’t no fool
    I would never leave my woman for you
    I would do anything to keep her as opposed to doing nothing to keep you”
    So Ms. Thang, don’t be amused by his wondering eye
    If he didn’t look, she’d wonder why
    As he observes your groove
    He may be led astray
    But he’ll realize that she is a lot to lose
    While you are nothing to gain

    © honeebrownsuga-ljf 2001
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oooooooooooooo gurl I like this I like this so much feelin wish I could hear more from you hey maybe I will :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now !!!!
     
  4. honeebrownsuga

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    Thank u serenti-poet! I'm glad u enjoyed this. I haven't been on in awhile but I have a few skits back in history if u're willing to take a gander. Well it may be a little longer than a gander but...u know what I'm sayin'. ;)

    In any event, I appreciate your response. Take care....
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is tyte!!

    ~lovely~
     
  6. honeebrownsuga

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    :thanks: LovelyGoldenOne!!
    Oh...and...CONGRATULATIONS!!! :toast: I wish u utter happiness on your road down 4Ever Lane!! :love:
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I"m willing! I want to hear MORE! LoL :) glad to hear from you.
     
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    Lol!@ Rich This one left him speechless. Tyte flow gurl! Somebody have to let those triflent sisters know!
     
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