Black Poetry : Laugh and Cry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Nov 24, 2007.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I saw ya for the first time since last Febuary.
    No call, no e-mail, I was shocked out of my mind.

    I wanted to hug and squeeze ya and then push you away.
    I wanted to tell you how much I needed ya.
    And at the same time not give myself away.

    You said that you were going to leave after the summer
    You had some more work to do
    I wanted to ask ya when you were coming back in town
    Cuz I missed ya
    While you were gone
    I just don't know
    Exactly what to do

    As we caught up
    It was a memorable time
    I sure did need that
    If you didn't mind

    And as soon as you entered my life
    You existed just the same as you came

    So suddenly
    We shared a moment of laughs
    And now I'm still trying to find my way

    Trying to figure out
    If it was closure
    Or a new beginning
    Trying to ponder if that was friendship
    Or if I was just silly

    I tried crying but started laughing last evening instead
    Don't know what that means
    But maybe its not as bad as I think

    I have to say you had me for sure, this summer
    I mean it was him and then it was you.

    Have to say that my little vacation made me feel free.
    And now I'm back at home trying to figure out
    How to let it all out
    What to do
    How to be me

    Yes, you put a move on my heart
    That is for sure
    I guess I didn't realize how bad I needed it
    The conversation for two

    And as we chilled out in the living room
    I was secretly in awe of that moment
    So tranquil and new

    I guess this thang, called love aint so bad after all
    Everyone does this love thang
    While I would sit back and laugh
    Remembering when I would act fast
    It caused me so much heartache that I didn't want more

    Can't jump to conclusions
    Cuz this a new day
    Just to let you know
    I tried to get a hold of you
    By the way....

    Desert Storm
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You deserve a hit, after all,

    we warrant love.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When we find someone who adds such warmth to our lives, we want that beauty to last for more than a season. Relating to and appreciating your words poetess.
     
  4. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love can be so Powerful

    it seems like even he does not know
    where things were
    and that han be the the ball that stays or falls
    you got your heart in his hands

    Beautiful.............so simple
    I am Inspired

    ~PeaceandLove~
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks again all.

    1Poet-thanks you cheered me up!

    watzinaname, you said it once again!

    platinum- I think that I would have to agree with you.

    Thanks to all ma sisses out there. Just trying to understand, ya know. Thanks for helping a sis out.

    D.S.
     
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