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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Quinessential1, Aug 9, 2003.

  1. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "INSTICTIVELY"



    Instinctively.... you drink from me, tasting each part of we, wine

    made from fruit ripe yet forbidden and thought to be out of season.


    Take this cup of mingled manifestations so flawlessly measured

    and brought together, culminated in this devine mixture,

    supremely creating an unknown something just a little bit better than HEAVEN.


    Instinctively.... you cling to me, tasting cocoa rich and caramel thick,

    provoking visions of liquid silk in the form of Bahamas breezes

    flowing free, easy, and warm through my mind.


    Passions promises prompt me into scenes of us dripping with

    delightful dreams of prominent phenomenal metaphoric AMENS!!

    BEING

    SEEING

    THINKING

    LIVING

    Heated HALLELUJAHS were crossbred and interwoven loosely

    coming together forming Technicolor palpitations while releasing

    BABYLON'S bold beautiful secrets shared sensual and true!!

    Collective quiet confessions cloud my mindscape helping me

    overcome the obvious meaning to already answered perplexing

    proposals.

    Saying simply and simply saying YOU love I as I love WE.....as we

    always have.....INSTINCTIVELY.

    YES....

    YES....

    No end.

    INSTINCTIVELY.


    ____________________________
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed............dis was very nice
     
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    nice read
    very nice
    Peace
     
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    yes more than a nice read...it was so smooth and sweet :)
     
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    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Trinit-

    If you don't stop, I'm gonna start thinking you are flirting with me!!

    But thanks for the read boo!! lol
     
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    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich & Blue-

    Your prescence and comments are invaluable.
    Thank you and as always many blessings.
     
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    Highlighting my favorite lines from a diamond uncovered...
    Passionate flow...flowing passionately!
     
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    A love that lives and breaths naturally. That's just how it should feel. Loving this flow.
     
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