Black Poetry : Late Night Visits

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sarcasm4eva, Apr 25, 2003.

  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    those visits meant the world to me
    and not for the obvious reasons
    you'd tell me to put a smile on my face
    when i thought it was all a disgrace

    then one night u touched me
    in more ways than one
    u sent shivers down my back
    and i had a heart attack

    i was ready to kill myself
    believe me, i tried
    u wouldnt hear of that

    u kept me sane
    at times when i thought i would lose my brain

    sitting n talking while listenin to the rain
    me tryin to hide my pain

    u saw right through me,
    told me it will all go away
    someday

    tears streaming down my face
    but not tears of sadness,
    tears of gladness

    u may never know what u mean 2 me
    im just pleased u were next 2 me
    those nights i couldnt see
    there was a brighter day
     
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    blackwizdom Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that's tight ... I can relate
     
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    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx blackwizdom............those were some of the worst n best times of my life............much love :)
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i can especially relate to dis one right HERRE! lol especially with the tears of hapiness neva thought a boi could make me cry cuz i waz happy. well newayz gurl keep flowin and i'm lookin 4ward to our next callabo!!----------serenti
     
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    aaawww thanx serenti......same guy who gave me happy tears made me wanna hurt him.......lol......check out "i'm missin u" n u'll see y...........much love :)
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aight i'll check dat out fa ya lol much luv back :love:
     
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    we never know what life has in store for us. Thats why it's important that we keep pushing on to the next day. Who knows? Tomorrow might bring you many blessings. I, m glad you chose to hang around. Might have not gotten the chance to hear this beautiful piece. thanks
     
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    it is all about timing and the right pearson at the right time is truly blessing
    nice poem
     
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