Black Poetry : Late night snack

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by kente417mojo, Jun 11, 2004.

  1. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What would be better than
    seeing you curled in my bed
    what we did running through my head
    as I hit replay again
    soft caresses
    followed by slow undressin'
    flawless body be the lesson
    on perfect anatomy
    and you gave it all to me
    and I took i willingly
    skin to skin
    up and down like oceans be
    I love my memory
    it shows you so clearly
    as if we were still in that moment
    "turn around" I whisper to thee
    and you abide so beautifully
    makes me forget there's misery
    in this imperfect world
    but I wouldn't know nothing about that
    as I love you, staring down at your back
    turned on as you react
    you're a tasty late-night snack :peace:
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :blush: man this was tight...
    flow head on..dang ok din hmmm
    nice my brother
    ....Angel
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Didn't you know that late night snacks can make you fat? :eek:hmy:
    what the hell...blow up :wink:
    I liked the way you rolled this, very nice indeed
     
  4. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks ladies. You women are the ones that inspire me. :luvv: Thank you for the love and the poems you write.
     
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    One hand wash the other...and both hands, wash the face.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u took it to new high str8 awesome flowing here
    keep the ink running
     
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    :hot: well gon ahead wit yo bad self:):thanks: for sharing this
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you $$RICH$$ and SwtT. Your responses are always appreciated. :court: Thanks family.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa...this was tight...very sensual images here, with some spice added in. And very crafty too.
     
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    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Watz. You are the :bomb:
    Always nice seeing your feedback.
     
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