Black Poetry : late night rendez-vous

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I saw you
    Creep’n ‘round before dawn and
    Fawning ova some otha brutha
    Like I never told ya
    I love ya

    Smiling…
    Whispering between gentle caresses
    KISSING
    Left me wishing it was me

    “good morning”
    I said as I passed
    So you’d know I saw you

    Our **** is through

    That was obvious by the
    “I don’t give a *****” twinkle in your eye
    I can’t lie
    My heart was heavy

    WHY

    Didn’t I stand by your side
    …defend your honor whenever they tried
    to paint you the “neighborhood ho”
    they know you to be
    but still, Boo
    I prayed our love would grow
    I stand here…all misty eyed
    Drowning in the sea of lies you’ve told me

    I see the fool I’ve been
    Time and again
    I gave you my heart
    …put my faith in you

    I was blind
    And I couldn’t see

    Now, I doL
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man I've been here...This is a tight flow of a love lost.........
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is my peotic roughneck!

    Man....:( This is one of those times, you just want to touch you on the back and then leave the room quietly! Such a beautiful rendering of the spirit that women do as much of the causing the hurt as suffering the hurt.
    Thanks for sharing...I think we can all relate to this in some way!
    Blessings on ya House!
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    b.


    ...well! i'll just say that she's the one missin' out! :wink:

    as always my dear... it's a divine pleasure to read you!

    thank you for sharing...

    itsallLove, chile!! (don't forget it neither! :tongue: )

    elayne.
     
  5. shaz

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    “Neighborhood ho”

    you new she was a ho
    and so did I
    but something about those big brow thighs
    made ***** wanna unwrap dat surprise
    now I been played
    (but still)
    wishing deep inside
    that she would’ve stayed

    but she ain’t that kinda ho
    hit it and quit it
    then move on to somo

    ***** U ho
    is what I say out loud
    but **** that **** was good
    is what I’m really thinking

    caint get mad cus I met here dancing on a table
    butter ball necked
    for a fist full of dollars
    but you know me I just had to holla
    so all I wanna know now is where the hell
    is my dolla
    ho


    (I feel ya bro we all gotz to luv a ho sometime) been their done that
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin this piece.
    Ain't it something when
    we finally open our eyes
    and see what's really real?


    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  7. poeticdelight

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    baller another creative masterpiece

    much lovenrespect

    one

    pd :)
     
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