Black Poetry : Late Last Night In The Pouring Rain (repost for Joyce)

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  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a love experience on my balcony....
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    au naturel
    down to bare feet

    I let the rain
    make love to me

    my face turned upward
    to the sky

    my arms outstretched
    as if to fly...

    the soothing pelting of the storm
    massaged my flesh
    and made me warm

    I closed my eyes, and
    I could feel
    flood gates burst forth;
    heaven's power to heal


    my body, sated
    my heart, made light
    my soul, set free
    in the storm
    last night

    Alyce, 2000
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    powerful drops of rain

    ya heart and soul
    the stormy night
    like love untouched
    this picture is painted beautiful

    MASTERPIECE.........Alyce....i love it.:heart: :kiss:
     
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    Alyce.......

    Such a refreshing scene

    thanks for the vision........


    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A

    This is all to fly...

    Madd Love
    Reas
     
  5. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce, Alyce, Alyce!

    It seems as though the read was even better...could be because of some of the trials that I've gone thru since then. Thank you for allowing me to experience the poetic depth of restoration. Tis refreshing indeed, to read again.
     
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    at one with/in sync with/alone with..nature

    what a beautiful thought/experience..

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    LET IT RAIN! LET IT RAIN! LET IT RAIN!
    This is an incredible piece Ms Alyce.

    BE
     
  8. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all

    and Joyce...I, too....felt something more, this time around. Perhaps because of some things I've been going through, as well.

    Thank you for giving me the opportunity to dust it off; so grateful to play any part of a blessing. :heart:

    a
     
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