Black Poetry : Last thing I do

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cuvriefloesta, Dec 21, 2003.

  1. cuvriefloesta

    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Over?
    Explain
    I will not complain
    I always been someone who was used to different things
    I got someone new
    Yes from what I can see you do too
    Its okay
    I'm okay
    I doubt it was love anyway
    Maybe lust
    Or infatuation
    Because I can barely remember a decent conversation
    We had
    All you did was make me sad
    Now I'm pulling so many numbers I pack them in a grocery bag
    Like at the grocery store
    I aint tripping any more
    And in the words of Ms.Jade
    I got my big head on the floor
    Aint no coming back
    I'm through with dreams
    I'm oh so over that
    Reality the only place to be
    Because I been at you stupid
    Foolish
    Ashanti
    But thats ove now
    Yes we over now
    When I see you staring
    I won't even look now
    Won't cry no more last poem I'll write for you
    Why else you think I named this poem Last Thing I Do
     
  2. EXpressurself

    EXpressurself Active Member MEMBER

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    Welcome,nice flow looking forward to reading some more of your writings in the future :spin:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes you know when it's time to move on, and you're ok with that. I enjoyed this, waiting for more...
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this flow....
     
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    this a tight scribe you have compose on this canvas...lots of strenght you do have..it is ok to still dream...i am feeling you this scribe
    let the flow roll
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice love how u mastered it
    flow on
     
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    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh how i love your spirit
    in this flo...i can relate
    to this one exactly... :cry:
    but i jus can't let go... :cry:
    but soon i will..it is hard :cry:
    i luvd this one
    GOD BLESS :star:
     
  8. cuvriefloesta

    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You so Much Everyone for making me feel so at home..i can't believe this is till my first week!!!
     
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