Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Keita Kenyatta, Aug 20, 2007.
Liked it when you said, "I tried to ignore the things that I knew,
only to find that truth will beat the hell out of you."
That is SOoOoOo TrUe!
Loved this honesty.
Beloved Kg MW Keita
I agree with Desert Storm.
stand on soldier
this life is a learning experience
if you care to make and take notes
lovedided the power here
Let me explain something about those cards in ya hand,
It's a "Queen" in that deck ..with a much greater demand.
So all the "Jacks & Joker's" that is dealt in the game,
The "Queen" alone, puts all others to shame.
Queens produce Kings from the womb...for these reasons:
To make that GRAND stand of all the four seasons.
From the dark, ...to a crawl, to a the King of the land,
It's a honor to know that this is your last stand!
Great piece of work poet, enjoyed reading it, thanks
When we know the truth, yet try to ignore it anyway, we rue the day we even considered ignoring it. Poet, this was a direct hit, potently scribed.
i felt this piece brother...
stand tall or don't stand at all...
Beloved MWkg Keita:
May I have your permission to post this on the Yahoo Groups on the internet?
whoa ! man i feel u and see u standing very tall in da light where
u put da truth in realism and crash da dark .......can't ignore dat !
nice poem brethren
i just read your piece and it was a truly inspiring testimony.
you are not alone.
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