Black Poetry : LAST STAND

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Keita Kenyatta, Aug 20, 2007.

  1. Keita Kenyatta

    Keita Kenyatta going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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  2. Desert Storm

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    Liked it when you said, "I tried to ignore the things that I knew,
    only to find that truth will beat the hell out of you."

    That is SOoOoOo TrUe!

    Loved this honesty.

    Blessings.
    Desert Storm
     
  3. Goddess Auset333

    Goddess Auset333 Banned MEMBER

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    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: Beloved Kg MW Keita:bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:

    I agree with Desert Storm.

    :SuN030: :SuN030: :SuN030:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    stand on soldier

    stand on

    this life is a learning experience

    if you care to make and take notes

    very strong

    lovedided the power here

    peace

    man
     
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    Let me explain something about those cards in ya hand,
    It's a "Queen" in that deck ..with a much greater demand.

    So all the "Jacks & Joker's" that is dealt in the game,
    The "Queen" alone, puts all others to shame.

    Queens produce Kings from the womb...for these reasons:
    To make that GRAND stand of all the four seasons.

    From the dark, ...to a crawl, to a the King of the land,
    It's a honor to know that this is your last stand!


    Great piece of work poet, enjoyed reading it, thanks
     
  6. watzinaname

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    When we know the truth, yet try to ignore it anyway, we rue the day we even considered ignoring it. Poet, this was a direct hit, potently scribed.
     
  7. Khasm13

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    i felt this piece brother...
    stand tall or don't stand at all...

    one love
    khasm
     
  8. Goddess Auset333

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    Beloved MWkg Keita:

    May I have your permission to post this on the Yahoo Groups on the internet?

    :qqb023: :qqb023: :qqb023:
     
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    whoa ! man i feel u and see u standing very tall in da light where
    u put da truth in realism and crash da dark .......can't ignore dat !
     
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    nice poem brethren

    i just read your piece and it was a truly inspiring testimony.
    you are not alone.
     
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