Black Poetry : Last Rites

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Dec 10, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now I lay me down to sleep
    Pray the Lord my life to keep
    If I should die before I wake
    Pray to God,
    My soul to taaaaaaaaaaaaaaaake

    Last rites...

    Tunnel ((light))

    Flash life...

    Sure you're right!

    All our peeps already there
    Family and friends,
    Who really care
    Cheering on my crawl
    To walk ~
    Steppin' as we know we ought

    Last rites...

    Tunnel ((light))

    Flash @ life...

    Know that's right!



    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes...
    nice very nice...:angel1:
     
  3. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Know thas/last rite.

    Bring it, I likes, I likes...
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    last rites dis was tyte
    lovinnnnnnnnn da scribe
     
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