Black Poetry : LAST POEM (plz reply)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lilcherry76, May 29, 2003.

  1. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the question still remains,
    will u b there,
    in my final hour,
    while i am on my death bed?
    will u b there,
    when i truly need u,
    when i have no 1 2 turn 2,
    but my reflection in the mirror?
    will u b there,
    when i have my 1st child,
    and tears stream down my face,
    when i have given life?
    will u b there,
    when nobody will listen to me,
    and tell me i am right,
    when i know i am wrong?
    when i am down 2 my last dime,
    and all hope is gone,
    the question still remains,
    will u b there?????????????????:confused:
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    i'll be here...
    when you get back...

    just have faith...
    and all doubts will be erased...

    peace
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yessssssss!!!
    I'll be their
    to comfort ya pains
    i'll be thier
    just call my name
    i'll be close
    in that hour
    lean on me
    ya my beautiful flower
    whisper of ya worthy
    even when ya wrong
    i'll be their ya never alone
    yesssss!!!!!
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm there!

    1poetsought ~
     
  5. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ill be there
    b/c Im your true friend
    Don't worry
    Poetic love will never end
    Ill be there
    to dry those tears
    Ill help you and your child through
    Those cruical years
    And On your deathbed
    Ill be at your side
    When you need to cry on a shoulder
    Ill be there to provide
    Don't worry lil cherry
    It's poetic
    I'll see you in August
    I won't forget it.......

    Peace n love lil cherry.!!!!!!!!!!H ave a fabolous Summer!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    :heart:
     
  6. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi lilcherry76,

    Wonderful read!! :)
     
  7. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'll be here
    to wipe your tears
    to tell you that there's nothing to fear
    sweetheart i will always be here
    i'll be here
    to erase doubt
    to tell you its misery
    you can do without
    Life is a battle
    which is hard to fight
    but its love
    that gets you through day and night
    so live life
    to its fullest extent
    and i know that
    everything in life is not pleasant
    but remember
    you're here for reason
    so life live
    as its a blessing!!!

    :D :D :D PUT A SMILE ON!! PUT A SMILE ON!!! EVERYBODY COME ON!!! PUT A SMILE ON!! :D :D :D

    Holla Back!!!
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'M HERE NOW...DOES THAT COUNT FOR MUCH??? :)
     
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    I'll always be here...and I hate to see you go...
     
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    I agree with everybody else, and I hope you don't stop posting poetry for us!
    Much love to ya gurl!!!
     
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