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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Dec 26, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    torn down…
    lost in the race…
    as my heart bleeds…cant breath….
    One of the last and only beginning…
    I run thru the wind….cant find my way…
    One wing and the
    other taken away….
    Higher and higher
    I reach my desires…
    Yearning for the end….
    as I begin to see the light…
    It becomes dim…runnin
    ..............................Runnin
    ......................................Runnin
    Can seems to find but
    runnin
    and
    ........................ runnin…
    lost in a upset world…..
    last one and only
    ..............................beginning….
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime to start u must end
    runnin
    ............runnin

    searching the beginning
    from the end
    this was a piece that took me somewhere
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah it do that...
    thanks for da love.....Angel
     
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    wow, you really captured the essence of the uncomfortable place, my sister. this is on
     
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    Keep reaching for that place, that moon, that star...even if you have to start over to get it. Feelin this.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Very nice....

    It put me in your state of mind...taking me back like Rich said to a certain place in time when I thought I'd never see the dawn of day.

    Trying....continuing....fighting tooth and nail...but progress is slow...days are long...effort unappreciated. I know the feeling.

    You can't start something else...until this thing ends.

    :toast:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis
    watzinaname
    Monetary
    thankz for da love
    on dis fam....
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Keep the flow coming mzblkangel. I'm loving the essence of your poetic blessing upon the page.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ExquisiteBalla thankz for stoppin by...
    glad ya likes
    :angel1:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    only the end of a beginning.... :new:
     
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