Quiet Poetry Lounge : Last Nyght

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A nyght without
    a loss of time
    spent wondering
    what will become
    of us
    ...come what May~
    but I've pondered the
    question slow - long
    that I'm wading in
    love's blue pool
    that stretches farther
    from the edge of
    Pudget Sound to
    the opposite end
    of San Fran's Bay
    ...and I wake up
    with you here
    in my bed -- the
    dark angel that
    I prayed to keep
    me safe
    when you depart
    from here
    words will not
    express the
    empty(me)ness
    I feel x 3 --
    a stone's throw away
    from L.O.V.I.N.G
    I long to be
    engulfed into your
    daily nyght dreams
    every hour from this
    'morn through an
    eternity -- I pray
    ...come with...
    All because we've had
    more than our share
    full of nyghts
    without a loss
    of time -- well spent
    in joyful bliss
    set to wonder
    and making blueprints
    on checkerboard sheets
    with matching palaise
    and pillows as our heads
    rest...
    comfort each other
    in close proximity
    then holding each other
    in experienced silence
    having not any regrets
    just what will
    become of us ~
    ...come what May
    Last nyght you
    brought me
    through my
    today



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *REPOST

    *repost
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2.....

    **** Sis!!

    & you say this is a repost?... did i miss it the 1st tyme?

    it is a phenomenal piece/peace!!! (WHOA!) it reminded

    me of "A Moment Away". thanks for sharing... :)

    Peace&Love.
    SunShyne~
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    words will not
    express the
    empty(me)ness
    I feel x 3 --
    a stone's throw away
    from L.O.V.I.N.G


    this was off the hook
    feeling this vibe
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet release lovin it wow!
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a soft, sensual flow to this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    backing this one up still under the sweet flow of dis one y'all
     
  8. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a nice one to bring back rich..........
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes it was, I think I'm even feeling it more the second time around, if that's possible...
     
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