Black Poetry : Last Nights Dream

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  1. ShortyLove21

    ShortyLove21 Active Member MEMBER

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    lasts night i dreamt you were mine.
    that i was yours for all time.
    i dreamt you held me in your arms.
    that you kept me from harm.
    i dreamt we were together and no one else mattered.
    as i woke the dream was shattered.
    my heart is alone and my eyes drift into space.
    but i am only seardhing for the night and the warmth of your embrace
     
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    ShortyLove21 Active Member MEMBER

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    Thankz for your support!
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    short but very sweet...much love for this piece
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice it was sweet...peace
     
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    JAD68 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply put... I LOVED IT.

    Don't let the dream slip away
     
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    ooooh, this one tugs at the heart strings

    my heart is alone and my eyes drift into space.
    but i am only seardhing for the night and the warmth of your embrace

    wow...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well pose of da dream
    awaken to lonelyness
    but da feelin was sweet
    tyte write
     
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