Black Poetry : Last Night

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  1. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Today it’s raining
    In this world of mine
    I can’t even muster the ability
    To leave this bed
    All I can do is turn my head
    And close my eyes
    And
    Remember
    Last night
    Oh Baby
    Last night
    Was
    No less than
    Incredible
    Supreme
    Sublime
    Last night made my body shiver
    And my mind explode
    I saw colors that even Crayola hadn’t thought of yet
    I do believe my toes
    Curled
    My eyes
    Rolled
    And my heart
    Stopped
    Today it’s raining in this world of mine
    But last night was the real storm
    You made the thunder roll and the lightning strike
    The windows rattle
    And the lights went out
    Last night
    Last night
    Last night
    I touched the stars
    Today it’s raining in this world of mine
    And still I lay in the aftermath
    Basking in the musky scent of
    Us
    Today it’s raining in this world of mine
    And as I turn my head, and close my eyes
    And breathe deeply into your pillow
    I remember
    Last night
     
  2. honeebrownsuga

    honeebrownsuga Active Member MEMBER

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    I feel u girl...

    "last night" is the last thing
    you want to remember
    a "last night" like this one
    you want to make an everyday adventure

    I enjoyed this...

    Thank u 4 sharing :heart:
     
  3. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "colours crayola hadn't even thought of yet"!!!

    Now Dats a POEM!!!!!!

    Natasha gurl...you wrote straight through the night and into the morning after!!!!!!

    I just couldn't help but smile about this one!!!!!

    *goodnight*



    :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar:
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nat....


    ...umm... i think it's tyme for me to be tellin'
    on you!! ...Last Night, huh? well! dayum! :)

    i can't wait to have one of those for ma self!
    this was wonderful-ly written gurl-friend!

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
  5. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rolling through the pages

    and came acroos this

    just had to bring it up again :D
     
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