Quiet Poetry Lounge : last night

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaz, Jul 6, 2001.

  1. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night our first night has seared not only your body but also your soul to me

    As I would follow the lines of your soft beautiful inner thighs to the private place you cherish as the ultimate prize
    reserved only for he who has first touched your mind heart and spirit and elevated them three on their journey to be free

    I tasted the sweet nectar of your anticipation of my gentle kisses and tongues caress
    As you gently pushed against my face as if to say yesss thiiiiiiis iiisss the place

    I placed one hand on your breast and the other on your beautiful side from the other side

    Not an inch of your body left untouched, unkissed, untasted, my appetite for your passion still unabated
    We would move to the point where your hair came undone as our bodies would merge to form just one

    Although many, many months of anticipation has brought us to this culmination, I must say as I lay here in the moment you are oh so amazing and far greater than my wildest imaginations.
    Your kiss your touch your bodies movements were a beautiful orchestration of your passions expressions where your heart, mind and body combined with the three of mine.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    STOP IT!!

    U MAKING ME HUNGRY AND LICKING MY CHOPS
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shazzzz....


    Oh My God....

    this was beautifully breath-taking.

    (& that's really all i can say ryght now)

    thank you for sharing. Wow!
    (imma go read it again)

    OneLuv.
    SunShyne~
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    shaz

    BEAUTIFUL
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    shaz

    i didn't know your were a true playa

    feeling the flow, no doubt

    and i ain't mad at cha
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaz!!

    Dog that was intense! absolutely!

    Respect
    Reas
     
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    hmmm....
    i shall flow from this.
    -7
     
  8. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $Rich$ GA_Sunshyne UbZoRbShUn DaStreet So'ja Reason and -7

    Thank you for the read u know that i seldom flow on this note but sometimes a bro just got to talk about the **** that makes him say (well u know what i said as i curled my toes) (LOL)
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaz....


    (LOL).... soooo, couldn't keep it to yaself, huh?

    itz all good!! it's nice when you guys are totally
    AFFECTED by us Queens!! (yeah i read it again). :)

    One.
    SunShyne~
     
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