Black Poetry : Last night

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  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night I shed tear.
    A tear for the parents who have lost their only daughter
    A tear for the orphans
    A tear the young souls with no hope
    A tear for the broken families
    A tear for the war victims
    A tear for the broken hearted
    A tear for the hungry
    A tear for the sick
    A tear for the poor at heart
    A tear for the non believers

    Last night, I shed a tear for all of humanity
    Tears mounted to cascading waterfalls from the very depth of my soul :cry:

    And for every tear shed for the world's injustice
    My Jesus wiped away the last trace
    Every tear turned into a prayer
    Faith then lept into my heart and elevated my soul
    Now, I believe that the tears I shed today
    Will be answered prayers. :angel1:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes they will be. this was a very heartfelt poem sure glad you shared it with us. keep up the good work.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling all your emotions crossing through dis piece
    very well felt
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very emotional I felt that sistah:wink:
     
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    This was beautiful, such a prayer is selfless and from the soul.
     
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    deeply emotive write...
    feeling this piece
    thanks for sharing with us...
     
  7. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tears I shed turned to prayer
    Asked Him why he was taking so long
    He answered, patience child
    Have faith in Me and continue to pray
    So still I pray
    And although I may not be here to see these prayers answered,
    I will know, that my Lord answered my prayers
    And wiped my tears.


    thanks for the love poets. Blessings!!!
     
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