Black Poetry : last night

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Sep 1, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    last night i tasted the
    syllables that coated the air
    and let my brain go high
    on ur clouds that struk the sky
    with nouns and verbs
    that reached into the
    depts of my stomack so that i can
    regurgitate them on my
    ink-anointed paper
    soaked in puddles
    of ur xpression.

    last night i felt what it was like
    to xperience the Big Dipper pour
    angel dust on u
    and the stars to cry
    for earths redemption.

    last night my pen blessed my
    poetry, with a eternal kiss

    last night, i knew poetry
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop:

    Love the imagery. Girl, u just keep getting better and better.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    last night i taste poetry
    this the bombbbbbbbbbbbbbb!!!!!
    u go gurl !!!!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHOA..........WHOA.........WHOA

    This was as they say..........Off the Chain!

    Girl..........I loved it, give us more of this.......Please!

    Story...this was Hot!............(Last night I knew poetry, wow)
     
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    wonderful, so full of...something good LOL this was very nice
     
  6. MORE

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    :hot: :hot: :hot: naw, i aint believin you are 13, naw, this is incredible, u know im your biggest fan, so come clean,

    tell ur real age, your like aristotle or somefin:rolling: :rolling: :rolling:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked it sooo much, I just wanted to read it and reply....again.

    I'm still basking in this flow!


    And...........please tell me you are not "13"...........I don't believe it

    I see.... a "Golden Child", definitely!
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis:thanks for the love, im glad u liked it:heart:

    $$RICH$$: lol thanks big bro, but my poetry can't hold a candle to u,when i read urs i feel the emotion, and i feel what u feel, thanks for the comment,
    -story
     
  9. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angel: thanks and u know i will not leave u hangin like that, of course i'll give u more and yes i am thirteen just to answer your question.

    MORE: GURL WASSUP, i aint seen u in that chat in a while u gots to come THROUGH! anyway, thanks and like i told angelic i am 13
    i'm very happy that u feelin my poetry, (like i feel ur poetry)
    and please believe i will give u more.
     
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