Black Poetry : Last Night

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by k0k0, Dec 14, 2002.

  1. k0k0

    k0k0 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    last night i was touched in the deepest way
    and in my mind i just have to replay
    it over and over and over
    and i let the events hover in my head
    cuz i'm still not ready for the night to be dead

    last night four play was on a new level
    and it left me in a state of dishevelment
    and i started off my day spent yet refreshed
    cuz i wuz hyped by everything that was done right
    all in the course of a few hours during the night

    last night i was verbally stimulated into a new bliss
    and i know this is a feeling i'll miss
    because that kinda thing only happens a few times in a lifetime
    i mean i was so mentally aroused my common sense was on the run
    and i was kinda upset that night ended and daytime begun

    last night his voice warmed my soul
    and his words curled my toes
    and his intelligence fired up my mind
    and his expressiveness sent chills down my spine
    and the gentleness in him made my body relax
    and all of it together .. made my spirit climax

    ****, what a night i had last night...:heart:
     
  2. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** what a poem

    lovin these lines

    "last night i was verbally stimulated into a new bliss"

    "and his intelligence fired up my mind"


    great work
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it is really good when the moment is perfect and spun into a whole night
    diggin your flow
     
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    k0k0.


    *sighin'* ....

    don't you just love nights like this?!
    i enjoyed the read... thorough-ly.

    alwayspeace,
    elayne.
     
  5. FeLoNy

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    hmm hmm hmm...

    emotional orgasm...aint it the greatest

    I was feeling this mind, body, and soul...

    Im new and a lot of you real give a brother inspiration...watch for me...700
     
  6. k0k0

    k0k0 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lpoet...thanks. i woke up the next day and the poem wrote itself.

    shaz...thank you. thats one of those nights thats almost betta than sex itself. lol almost..

    elayne..thanks. yes i love nights like that. kind that you think back on and just sigh

    felony...brotha, you said it all. anything emotional thats good is the greatest. thanks. and i'm fairly new myself...but they have a lot of love here for us newbies. i'll keep my eyes pealed for your flow...
     
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    MissPoetik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    last night...

    those are the nights that i cherish with my man... we are an hour apart and to me... the only way that a long distance relationship can work is through a whole lot of trust, strength and deep-meaningful conversation. nice read.
     
  8. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** girl!!
    i didn't know i was that good!!!!!!lol
    j/p yall.....im lovin this here...
    i know how one of those 'special"
    nights are but havent had one of those in a while....
    thanx koko 4 remindin me.........(jealous)


    keep those emotional and sexual stimulants surfacin on these
    threads....cause ur in fire gurl...
     
  9. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was cool...nights like this are rare.
     
  10. klabarron

    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    koko this is a knock out piece.
    keep the flow sweet chocolate poet.
    sweet ----
     
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