Black Poetry : Last Night (my 1st Nasty poem)

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  1. NittyGrit

    NittyGrit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    his letters are seductive
    with an attractive curve and pitch
    that somehow seem
    to say the things
    that take her
    somewhere between fantasy
    and this

    their rise and fall
    stroke her soul
    spelling and telling her
    to lose control
    all by her lonesome
    so no one else knows
    the more she reads
    he grabs a hold
    touching just right
    caressing so tight
    she wouldn't let go
    if she could

    it feels so good
    but this aint lust
    this aint a love relationship
    built on trust
    it’s about pouring intimacy
    into her half empty cup
    this is passionate poetry
    can't you hear the thrusts
    and moans

    he tells her his secrets
    she listens and groans
    he writes aphrodisiacs
    that impress & turn on
    the lights
    she explores her dark side
    and admits
    she's the freaky type

    he rubs sentences over her senses
    she interprets them with passion
    he grabs her waist
    goes inside her space
    searching for pleasure
    & climaxes

    as she reads between the lines
    her fingers move between her legs
    he inserts his size inside her mind
    with a pen that's long and erect
    the more she reads
    the more she needs
    so hotter...and wetter the ink gets
    his imagination stands in front of her
    she kneels and gives him head
    sucking the sounds and action words
    wanting all that she can get

    he strokes deep thoughts over her g-spot
    and asks if she wants to taste
    she moves her tongue
    saying "Papi give me some
    ...don’t let any go to waste”

    the silence gets loud
    as his punctuation
    marks & pounds
    she’s getting all she can take
    then he quickly pulls it out
    puts it on her mouth
    and writes a smile across her face

    her nipples throb with passion
    her fingers are covered in goo
    I think I know who the man was
    but was
    the woman
    u
    last night?

    PHEnt (c) 2009
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nitty:
    Are you sure this is your 1st....
    I tend to prefer "erotic" over "nasty". lol
    This was truly some HOTT PROPERTY!!!
    You poetically pleased your page.

    Looking forward to the 2nd one.:)

    Much Luv
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    caliente, caliente, whew!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heatwave rump roast and toasty !!!
    Da flava of this hot spicy flow was awesome Nitty
     
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    Agreeing with 4EverLuv, this erotic feast seems like a technique you've mastered, surely a recipe for spicy seduction poet.
     
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    lol I gotta agree with my sisters that sexy writing aint all nastee :) and this one does veer more erotica than just an all out nastee piece that needs a parental discretion advisory associated with it lol

    very erotic brotha NG :read:
     
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