Black Poetry : LAST NIGHT MAZE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Last night
    I
    watch da clouds
    assassinate
    the moon dance
    I
    heard a cry in da sky
    startled moonbeams
    fleeting from da handz
    executioner
    clash,striking hard
    in that moment of
    perplexity
    heavens eyez well
    to weep
    as da wind lament
    sweep da land
    I heard it
    last night
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    the still of the night

    is not always so still

    i like how you capture the moment here
     
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    Even though last night's stormy sky put a shadow in front of the golden moon beams, their light will return upon you. I envisioned how this must have transpired as I read each line poet. Much enjoyed.
     
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    Thank you both for the envision of view of this stormy maze dat's gusty......happy y'all enjoyed .
    so'ja & watz much love family
     
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    oh my :eek:
    i like how this started out subtle and took a twist :)
    shorter than the average Rich joint :)
    (you sure you okay? lol)
     
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    i'm great sis just another one of my many faces or style on display !!!
     
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