Black Poetry : Last night I......by $$RICH$$ N MzBlkAngel

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Angel......
    Last night
    I felt ur touch
    Had me moanin
    in my sleep…
    thinking it all was real
    as you touch me
    here and there
    Makin it feel so good…
    Embracing your love as if
    You was right beside me…
    In my sleep
    the vibes you
    throw my way
    runs me crazy
    like a forbidden dance
    we began to commit
    the crime….
    Foldin, Rollin
    Rockin
    Hot like fire
    Releasin desires
    As we play n rock
    Singin
    Callin names
    Grabbin sheets
    Explorin our love
    as we intertwine
    compassion ally
    ten tally
    caressin
    mentally
    in dis forbidden dance
    bodies clashing
    rapid thumps
    emotions flowin
    as we taste the
    Essence of us in the air
    With the warm embrace
    Lip to lip lock
    as we rock
    To the point of no return
    Twistin n hittin
    Loud whisper cries
    As it all comes to a peek
    Last night
    I felt ur touch
    Had me moanin
    in my sleep………

    $$RICH$$......
    Last night I felt ya touch
    had my love in a rush
    feeling the gentle sweetness
    and the warmth of blissness
    tenderly as we embrace
    and the smile upon ya face
    we dance in romance
    last night
    as secrets told
    deep pleasure made
    moans of crave
    feelin, holdin, lovin
    inside compassion
    as we made love
    lip lockin
    bodies rockin
    none stoppin
    last night
    as our hearts took
    up in flyte to a pure
    delight
    cross the moon light
    I scribe ya name
    hittin , mixin , dippin
    to perfection
    fulfillin ya body essence
    wit joy as we swang
    bang and dance
    til da next mornning
    fancy us and da
    touching clutch
    of love made last night !

    A $$RICH$$ N MzBlkAngel Production 2004​
     
  2. kente417mojo

    kente417mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like a fun night ya'll. Must be nice.
    That was nice. Cool poem.
     
  3. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whewwwwww weeee that what hot like fiyah!
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    imaginative poem...i liked it alot...
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hot flow you 2 as per your usual.
     
  6. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa

    Can't ouch this...smh
    3 words
    HOT :hot:
    HOT :hot:
    HOT :hot:
     
  7. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$...
    I think I can keep a secret...were you really :sleep: :sleep:? ...sound more like "CREEPING to me :grin:

    ANGEL...
    What beautiful music the two of you have...sure hope you woke up with a yard long :grin: :grin: :grin:

    this duo, like all the rest that you do is the bomb!!!
     
  8. Melody

    Melody Active Member MEMBER

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    Ooh...i don't think my lil niece should be reading this with me...hot y'all. That was beautiful...grown-folk business! *smile*
     
  9. turtle1

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    QQ

    HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I LIKE THIS ONE! A VERRY GOOD JOB!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thanks family this only the start wait til i really get down
    it will be nothing but fire N' desire like red alert!!!!
    thanks....justbnme......LovelyG......watz.....nita....queents.....melody....turtle
    peace and Luv for the love on dis collab
     
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