Black Poetry : Last Night Caramelpython & blkangel colaboration

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Dec 1, 2003.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Python"

    Last night I held you tight.
    The feeling was right..
    the moon shone, oh so bright.
    The stars tingled with sheer delight.

    Last night I held you tight,.
    Our hearts danced and swayed
    the night hawk whispered our song.
    Wishing our Love to remain strong.

    Last night our lips touched.
    We felt as warm as a noon day.
    We rejoyced with ecstasy and
    swooned too the song of the wind.

    Heavy hearted we parted remembering
    the wonder's of the night and the
    delight's we shared. Can we forget
    last night when we held each other
    tight and the feeling was right.


    "Angel"

    Beauty in last night…
    As you held me tight
    the stars played around the moon
    it beam so bright
    My heart escaped
    As we intertwined and played
    Swayin to our hearts call…

    Laying in your arms..
    As you trance my heart…
    Recallin past time
    last night was the
    taken of two..
    Playin in the moon’s light
    As you held me tight
    Last night

    Wind charms in a distance
    As the breeze of a lovers call
    Was answered….last night

    A tear knowin we had to part
    ponders away at my heart…
    Remembering the
    wonders of what we reach
    last night the delight of it all
    as we released hands..
    last night….

    "Caramelpython"

    Last night still holds my soul
    within it's passionate fold
    I felt it caress us as one
    before the riseing of the next sun

    I held an "ANGEL" within my arms
    and she sperad her wings and poetic charms.
    Last Night I rode the clouds
    as Oue love sang tunes aloud

    last Night I realeased my soul into your haven
    then entered my body through this poetic raven
    The sun has risen and last Night is through
    but my love still has thoughts of you!

    thoughts of :kiss: ..........Last night!
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is very beautiful ..
    loving the gentle caring feeling
    coming from this wonderful collab
    Peace
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :shades: beautiful!
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed tyte scribeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
    flow head on and bring it y'all on fire
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater..thanks for the support :spin:

    LovelyGoldenOne..glad to see thanks for da love :grouphug:

    $$RICH$$...wow that means alot comin from you glad ya like it...:angel1:
     
  6. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a beautiful and heartfelt flow........I loved every word of it..........
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This read so easy and sweet...beautiful!!
     
  8. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night seemed so beautiful.

    I hope this isn't the last night.

    Y'all put it down.
     
  9. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    encore...encore
    this was truely beautiful
    peace
    khasm
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Olakuoto
    foxylady30315
    watzinaname
    PositiveMindset
    Khasm13

    thank you all for showing love...CP MIA..but we both are grateful for the love given and support....
    much love to each and everyone of ya...:angel1:
     
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