Black Poetry : last minute christmas gift, destee

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by hi-wa, Dec 23, 2001.

  1. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    can u read between the lines in my words?
    been lookin for a place to displace
    my nerves
    verbs frustrating me, bumpin around
    in my brain caus they have no where
    to release, be at ease and peace
    writing for a while but needed a better way to
    express my stress so others can put a
    definitive label on my life's mess
    then stumbled across destee
    treated just like a brutha hid in the corna
    of the internet/betta yet, shaded by banner ads
    and cheap airline tickets from airtran to Trinidad
    and my mental stimulated by emulated and celebrated minds
    finding time (and a place) to unwind
    reaching out touching others but not with
    A
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    with destee!
    Thanx for your prescence, essence, excellence
    given me a confidence in my writing i would've
    never received from dim lighting

    happy holidays destee fam

    -a piece from my mental filing cabinet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    LIKEWISE BRUTA LIKEWISE

    HAPPY HOLIDAY TO U MY FRIEND
    SO GLAD U WAS ABLE TO SEE WITHIN
    AND FLOW UPON US IN WHOLE
    VIBING & SCRIBING YA MIND DA EMOTIONS
    MAY YA LIGHT SHINE BRIGHTER THEN BEFORE
    SO U CAN HIT US WIT MORE........THANK U
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    not only between the lines
    but in the spaces of every letter
    in the loops of the p's and the d's
    massaging my soul with the o's
    stroking the staff on the t's
    tracing the curve in the c's
    clutching all that is within
    close to my heart my friend

    thank you very much :heart:

    see you at da party ...

    Birthday Party Forum

    We need your vote - What time should the games begin?
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    wow ... this is a great peace! :toast:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yesteryears memories
     
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