Black Poetry : LAST LETTER

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Sep 11, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    I SENT U A LETTER
    just to let you know
    that i love you
    but will let you go
    not askin you to change
    but simply to see
    that im tired and the games
    they must cease.

    i confessed my love
    for the very first time
    with spoken word to you
    and in the letter, one line
    what u do from here
    is up to you
    the last three lines
    said what i will do.

    i gave a card too
    for a keepsake
    so when you wake up
    you'll read what is says
    i was so patient
    tolerant beyond belief
    and just made love to you
    and may just have to leave.

    so when you get ready
    im sure you'll call me
    when you read my last letter
    and my face u don't see
    and my voice echoes thru
    the walls in your home
    you'll read my last letter
    and pick up the phone.
    .
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    str8 like the flow alot...
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very tight...and very true. loved it.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up da LETTER of truth
    flow on sis....
     
  5. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
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    I know this all too well... nice flow...
     
  6. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man, i liked this one, MORE, :) it was tyte
    much love,
    -story
     
  7. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice read MORE :)
    i loved it beginning to end :)
     
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