Black Poetry : Last Laugh!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticshawty, Jun 14, 2004.

  1. poeticshawty

    poeticshawty Member MEMBER

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    undefinedI finally let you go
    Now you want me back
    I guess they were right when they said
    “You never really know what you have until it’s something you lack”
    Calling me everyday
    **** that’s something new
    All because you realized that there will never be a me and you
    There’s no longer an us, no longer a pair
    No longer a girl that will always be there
    You played your game shawty
    But you didn’t play your cards right
    I seen you and my cousin in the club on Saturday night
    What you didn’t know she was my cousin?
    That’s because we set your *** up
    Just wanted to see if you were faithful
    But now I am black woman fed up
    Not good you may say
    Not good at all
    So if you got sense don’t even pick up the phone to try to call
    Thought you was a big player
    Thought you was the ****
    Not anymore
    You just got dismissed
    Big player Ha ha
    Didn’t think I knew
    You tried to play me but the last laugh is on you
     
  2. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet revenge....lol :laugh:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i hear ya whoaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a mouthful...

    flow on poet...flow on..
     
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    monad.poetress Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words are so true
    It feels good to be able to say
    "ITS OVER CAUSE I SAY SO"
    "AND I'M NOT COMING BACK" :nono:

    Good poem
    Monad.poetress
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Here's hoping that the last laugh is on him...if he's carrying any baggage, then the last laugh may be on 'many. Good job the way you posed this poem.
     
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