Black Poetry : Last Chance

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sweet baby_face, Jan 10, 2004.

  1. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rite now
    i have no time 2 postpone anything
    this is
    my last chance
    to really exprees my thoghts
    i'm tired of keepin' u guessin'
    and qwestion' my feelin's

    this is
    my final opportunity
    to develop something between
    u and me
    i have no more time
    2 be shy
    and deny
    what i feel inside

    This is
    my last chance
    to say
    that i love the way
    i feel around
    u and
    no1 else
    i need
    to stop puttin my feelin's on the shelf

    this is
    the final
    and last time
    no more beatin around tha bush
    i can't hold it back no longer
    gotta stop bitin' my tongue
    i need to stop tellin myself
    that this is wrong

    well, i'll just say it:
    I love u just as much as u love me
    u make me feel
    undeniablely happy
    u've put a brand-new joy inside of me
    i'm tired of holding back my feelins

    So
    alrite let me call him
    and tell him
    how i feel
    b4 i lose
    MY LAST CHANCE!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooooweeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
    indeed call
    make dat call
    get on da phone .......call

    speak and tell what u feel and the love what a thrill
    CALL !!
     
  3. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, make the call... I'd love to be a recipient of the phone call with this type of emotion and feeling behind it. wonderful piece

    Thanks for sharing
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    instant backflash...

    i didn't take my last chance
    before he left for college and
    i still remember how I felt
    when ever he was around...


    go for it sistah. :)


    definitely
    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    make that call....
    nice flow on last chance
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Agreeing with everyone on this, call...You'll forever wonder if you don't...and, nicely written.
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you take a sister back to that
    young love...when the moment
    needed to be siezed...and
    nothing would stand in the way
    felt the beauty of urgency in this piece
     
  8. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks 4 the love on this. I will take heed 2 yr advice.
     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :nono: Never let an oppertunity pass you by... grasp the moment and take charge of your destiny.. give a brother a call, LOL
    Nice scribe lady strong and lovely.
     
  10. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    speak on that sista :) go go go go head :D
     
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