Black Poetry : Last Call of the Day

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GA_Sunshyne, May 3, 2001.

  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it seems only ryght
    that since we can't be
    in the same place...
    ...at the same tyme
    every nyght
    (at least not constantly)
    then you should be—
    my last call of the day

    i need your sweet dulcet
    tones to color my last waking
    moments in hues of You …
    & for your marvelously
    melodious voice to plaster
    my mental with vivid
    visuals of our immaculate
    intimate interactions

    But not just that….

    i want to lie here talking &
    laughing & sharing our day
    in such a way that the miles
    between your line & mine
    expeditiously evaporate &
    i intuitively experience your
    perfect presence seductively
    wrapping around me—
    ……from head to feet……

    And then….

    when sleep at last claims my
    consciousness I want to meet
    you in dreams allowing your
    essence to continuously love
    me involuntarily thru out the
    nyght so that when I’m awake
    you’ll be with me in every way
    until I once again make—
    my last call of the day

    ©SunshyneOrygynals 2001, all rights reserved
     
  2. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sunshyne

    this was a...hmmmmm...beautiful...sentimental...loving...

    PEACE!!!!!;)
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice flow...

    sista GA~ I can get with this feeling...!!
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like Whoa Blakgurl!!!!

    Ya scribes are passionate as always!!!!

    I :heart: it!!!

    I know I know...ya just do what ya do right??? :laugh:

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SAVE THE LAST DANCE 4 ME..

    YET SO FAR BY MILES OF THE WAY
    ONLY TOO CLOSE IN HEART
    AS WE DANCE IN ROMANCE OF BEINGS
    WEAVED IN LOVETH ARMS OF THOUGHTS

    NOW WE HOLD OUR SOULS AS IF WE
    HAD NO TOMORROW AS THE NIGHT
    PASS GENTLY WE FALL ASLEEP
    IN THE CLUTCH OF BEAUTY WE DEFINED
    IN OUR HEARTS
    THE LAST DANCE WAS 4 ME ...Ahhhhhh!!!
    AS THE LYGHTS DEM NOW I TAKE FLYGHT
    TO MY KINGDOM PLACE IN THE SKY.....
     
  6. raheem

    raheem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    full

    of meaning.


    r
     
  7. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Family. thanks for the AlwaysLove... this one
    is intensely personal... & i was happy to share it with
    you. you make me shyne bryghter every tyme... :):):)
     
  8. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now thats the way to make a last call
    I really enjoyed the read
     
  9. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ga!!

    This scribe is just absolutely scrumptious!!
    Keep doing your thang Sis!
    Jyntl
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SHAZ.JB. thanks for the read! glad you enjoyed it!
    you are appreciated... MUCH!! AlwaysLove~
     
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