Quiet Poetry Lounge : Last Breath

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GYPSYMAN, Jun 28, 2001.

  1. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Down dimlit corridors
    to partake in
    shady dealings
    "gripped steel" reflect
    suspicious feelings
    heartbeat LOUD
    in ears

    WHUMP WHUMP !
    WHUMP WHUMP WHUMP WHUMP!

    chest tight....
    trying to ignore
    "instinctual" fears
    T I M E S L O W S
    cant hear whatchu sayin.....
    sounds Chinese
    but H E ' S
    "Panamanian"
    I F E E L
    sweat on neck
    my TECH feels
    T O O F A R
    3rd man on right
    gotta scar
    on face and forearm
    looks f a m i l i a r
    wait a sec !
    thats.....!

    **** !

    he SEE'S ME ...SEE HIM...
    now H E ' S R E A CHING
    SO IS.. S L I M
    next.... T O H I M
    my "shyts" T A N G L E D
    I'M facin'
    BOTH
    at a
    P H U C K ED UP
    A N GL E

    B L A U GH!!! BLAUGH!!!!!
    BLAUGH !! B L A U G H!!!

    L I F E' S F L A S H I N now
    thinkin how
    aint been no A N G E L
    SHOULDA'
    COULDA'
    WOULDA'
    stopped THIS **** !
    shoulda BEEN
    controlled my G R E E D
    and went

    L E G I T !

    ...got T W O M I N U T E S

    M A Y B E

    Bullets burnin' W H I T E H O T
    too late
    to
    S A V E M E....

    T E A R S FALLIN' NOW
    D E A T H CALLIN' NOW

    MY SON !
    MY DAUGHTER !
    MY GIRL !!
    MY MOM !!!

    ...I start saying.."Al Fati-HA"..from
    THE H O L Y Q U ' R A N
    move on to
    thirty four, seventeen
    in T H E
    B O O K O F P S A L M S


    " THE RIGHTEOUS CRY, AND THE LORD HEARETH AND DELIVERETH THEM OUT OF ALL THEIR TROUBLES."

    AND
    man..
    I got T R O U B L E S
    AND
    gunshots in
    D O U B L E S
    AND
    LIFE B L O O DS LE A K I N'
    AND
    ***** ! I' M B L E E D I N'
    MOUTH DRY FACE UP
    DARKNESS
    S N E A K I N' UP
    MAKIN DEALS
    NOW
    WITH WHOEVER'S LISTENIN'
    IN MY
    "MINDS EYES"
    KISSIN'
    MY DAUGHTER GOODBYE
    TELLIN MY SON
    NEVER HUSTLE
    CHEAT STEAL
    OR
    LIE
    ASKING G O D
    WHY...?

    I
    GOT....TUH

    DIE ?

    WHEN I KNOW VERY WELL..

    YOU LIVE HELL

    IN THE END....

    YOU

    GET

    HELL.



    PEACE SON

    GOTTA BAIL....................







    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well ... Well ... Well...

    I missed ya' ... I thought you left me hangin', but now I see you didn't!

    You came back with such an extraordinary flow ~

    Tight ~~to death!

    :heart:
     
  3. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PEACE N2

    HAVE'NT HAD TIME TO DO ONE OF MY FAVORITE THINGS..CHU KNOW?? MISS OUR CYPHER....HOW HAVE U BEEN???

    THANKS 4 THE FEEDBACK ON THIS....
    MUCH:heart: :heart: MUCH RESPECT

    On A Continuous Journey
    GYPSYMAN
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GYPSY

    Hurry up ... and get back on top of your square ~ I'm waiting for you... CHU KNOW!?!!! :lol:

    I'm definitely missin me some GYP(Exta)SY, but I'm maintaining!! :wink:

    MUCH :heart: FOR U 2
     
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