Khasm13 : land of milk and honey...

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  1. Khasm13

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    in this land, i walk the streets
    with soul unsheathed
    because of the love this land bequeathed
    these streets are sweeped
    and washed clean from past mothers
    that weeped
    the dirt from the streets
    seeped underneath
    this now clean and tranquil land
    one of the reasons being
    this land is nolonger run by man
    womens love for long lasting life
    and peace...walk hand and hand
    with natures master plan
    joyful cries of nightingales..take over the night time sky
    as the chest of all people swell...with compassion for all, not just i
    what b4 seemed impossible because no one tried
    is now reality...fear and depression have no where to hide
    in these streets
    clean enough to walk in bare feets
    no remembrance of white sheets
    or crack rocks in heaps
    no remembrance of poor healthcare
    because now everyone and everybody...wants to share
    the love of God is everywhere
    when b4 we were crabs in a barrel
    everyday is now like a christmas carol
    listen to the street herald
    spreading good news
    instead of sprouting the blues
    women and children abused
    and minorites left without clues
    in decrepit mockeries of learning schools
    now...all have the tools
    in this land
    no one is thrown to the wolves
    fat or skinny
    light or dark
    one or many
    and in this land
    no one lives in the park
    underneath the maple tree
    because in this land
    minds are free
    like the Lord intended them to be...
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:
    Wonderful Scribe Khasm!
    Wow! This is Awesome!
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Khasm the great............nice drop
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa!!! my lord I have love for this piece. Khasm, you really really brought it this time. mad props for this.
     
  5. angelicsage

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    Oh my, King Khasm...

    The

    ..........Bar

    ................of


    ....................Excellence


    .....................................Has been raised beyond measure... :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:


    Thank you so much for this reflective peace of insight into the purpose, accomplishments and endless possibilites of the "WOMAN"...XOXOXOXO on your Consciousness... :wink:
     
  6. MANASIAC

    MANASIAC Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Poem. Nice Poem.
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this one wow
    speaks loud
    you out did it on this one....
    loved it....

    no one lives in the park
    underneath the maple tree
    because in this land
    minds are free
    like the Lord intented them to be


    can ya say it again

    minds are free
    like the Lord intented them to be


    flow on speak loud...ya suit is clean....:lol:
    love it!!!!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If only Khasm, if only...What a wonderful vision brought before our eyes by the strategic placement of your words, just had me smiling and imagining myself there.
     
  9. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well said...we do or did run the world at one time...and now were back :puke: this was indeed tight...keep shining.
     
  10. Mawelulu1Luv

    Mawelulu1Luv Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A Powerful Majestic Vision of A World to Come...


    A Tyte' Inspiring Write!!
     
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