Black Poetry : Lamp-Light Lovers

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Feb 17, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fonder paths than lakes
    the steps that we take
    the wishes things we make

    our touch is like eruption
    sounds sings sighs of destructions
    breaking, suction, creating
    friction---the addiction
    a tru depiction of our connections
    the seperate sections
    the world moves seduced
    because of our attraction
    no distraction
    each breath unleft
    the wind the new direction
    the distance, a lesson

    why wake what weather
    is this?
    my make to smile so far
    from sight
    recognizable livelihood
    no possibly tomorrow to trip over
    the hour remains upon us
    the inkling
    that your lips should part to meet mine
    suspicious kisses
    overlooking the shoreline
    to hold on to you for more time
    true, without this dreamlight
    you're nowhere to find
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Antar, this was sooo...tyte. I can totally feel like im in the presence of a great love. And I love it when I can feel it:)
     
  3. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SwT- I'm glad that you can feel it. It's real.

    One-love,
    Antar
     
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    Yes, Antar, it sounds as though you have been swept away, this was a deep, loving scribe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribing on the wisdom of love
    flow on Antar............
     
  6. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks $$RICH$$ , watzinaname
    for responding to this

    my bus for takin a minute
    yeah i gotta lot of love to
    give

    one love,
    /antar
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping: :book: This was so indescribable
    Lovely is the word lovin this piece
    :wink:
     
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    there was just something about
    that line *suspicious kisses*...
    that just hit me...
    this was cool...
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet flowing now ya know i am feelin this vibe
    Peace
    Angel
     
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