Black Poetry : lamenting lost lovers

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by StarGoddess, Mar 26, 2001.

  1. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maddly,
    he scribles into his pad...
    frenzied phrases unfurling fanatically
    mentally
    calling out her name-
    while far away geographically
    she sits answers his claim...
    caressing her skin as if it is his touch,
    standing idly as if he's near-
    eyes crowded with tears
    as she reads his thoughts
    wishing she could have him there
    to hold him close and stroke his hair,
    kiss his lips and look deep in his eyes
    instead of staring blankly into daydreams-
    lasciviously lamenting
    for a love gone beyond dementing...
    needing to be connected to him
    for he is as vital to her as air-
    telepathically transmitting verses
    that wind and constrict his heart like a boa
    transforming his patterns and derailing his train of thought
    so that she is the only one that remains
    grasping his notes to his chest whispering...
    uttering his mutterings
    hoping his musings reach her ears
    as they vicariously float from him
    into the air with care-
    souls converging
    though space is explurging
    and punishing them for lives past wrongs-
    somewhere long ago they loved and lost
    now aimlessly wandering through hyperspace
    their fate they dare to accost
    while in their hearts they sing a mounful song...
    fighting to find a way to each other through the confusion
    to touch
    to know
    to connect...
    but in written words only
    can they consumate
    their cosmic union.
    Blasphemy.

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  2. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    United thru words, I know the feeling..
    Great Piece.
     
  3. Bishop

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    NOW THIS ONE I LIKE!!!! Hold on and keep the faith and soon destiny just may unite you two....

    Bishop
     
  4. Street So'ja

    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    amen

    absence makes the heart grow fondest
     
  5. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dayuuum StarG!!!!

    This is a seriously nice piece of work!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love is in the Air

    StarGoddess~
    I know the feeling sis!
    Extraordinary work!!!

    Afri
     
  7. hypersleep

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    yes.... i know this

    don't forget the supreme.

    you're always supreme baby... always
     
  8. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo this one is tyte..

    nuff said

    j'hiah
    prayin'
    in his serene garden
     
  9. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *freefalling*

    thanks for showing me love guys!!

    and hyper...baby....i'm glad you came...
    glad your here with me
    even if it is only through written words

    it still soars my soul

    *levitating*
     
  10. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you betta g'on now!!!... you hear me??? (lol)

    SGS...

    all i can do is shake my head
    at dis one!! ... i am diggin'
    it mos def... (wit 2 **** shovels!)

    you flowed dis one sis...
    umm hmm... das ryght!! :)

    Peace&:heart:...
    Sunshyne~
     
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