Black Poetry : Lamented Love

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ELLEGY.

    Songs
    that spin
    records
    expressing regret
    on mourning
    turntables going
    round~and~round
    moving the sadness and
    creeping with
    disbelief
    ...Grieving through
    the process
    feeling stricken
    by sorrow
    long since
    'lifetracks'
    recorded on
    cd's were
    #1 hits
    but then again
    singing about
    misery needs
    only be repressed
    and yet
    a true musician
    seeks to sing the
    song of freedom
    from the
    usual restraints
    that limit love
    to reach other degrees
    of lustful latitude...
    you see, that what makes
    the difference
    when sad songs
    reflect
    the harmony
    of lamented love ~~



    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2..

    What I appreciate most about your poetry are your unique phrases

    I mean..where else would I come across "lustful latitude"...except in one of your scribes ;)

    Don't even worry about lost peaks and climaxes...stay safe in the valley gurl...and write

    *longitudinal-studies*

    :toast:
     
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