Black Poetry : lament

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Derrick Jay, Jul 9, 2001.

  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    made a wish upon a fallen star
    and it blinked
    how did i end up here
    must have taken a wrong turn
    i think
    cause this sho ain't where i intended to be
    on my knees
    longing to be free
    led by my darkest desires
    soul on fire
    flames singing a choirs eulogy
    as scratch rocked the pulpit
    wishing hard again to catch that last twilight
    gleaming
    my spirit is having a fit
    tears stream at my demise
    fooled myself into believing the prize was easy
    sleazy comfort in a demons kiss
    i miss the way it used to be
    another lie i told myself briefly
    speaking selfishly
    as again i enter the domain
    sitting at the table with cain
    sharing a cup of lustful cries
    a false sense of peace
    contained by a feeling of pleasure
    that only goes as far as my eyes can see....
     
  2. Cinamon365

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    DJ

    Nice piece of art work you have drawn here.
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Derrick Jay Haaaaaay :wave:

    wow ... i'm loving this
    you making wishing on fallen stars that blink
    a beautiful thing

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's so good to see you heyah, dj. i'm lovin' this piece. keep on scribin', dear poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BLINKING NOTIONS OF STARS

    MAN O' MAN U LAID IT OUT
    TO CANVAS WIT A SWEET BRUSH
    FLOW ME MO!!!!:toast:
     
  6. Amun-Ra

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    Dr. J

    I feel this one in my toes--I know the feeling and you have captured it exactly as I remember it--the Dr. is in the house--keep scribing--Amun-Ra

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