Black Poetry : Lady Sweet

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  1. realrawism

    realrawism Active Member MEMBER

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    Lady sweet
    Midnight summer wind
    long legs never end
    I want to be your spoon you eat with
    Lady sweet
    Sunshine dried
    highway hips, curving taking me for a ride
    I want to be the lines within your hands
    forever
    Lady sweet
    Morning skin
    Tongue talk
    I watch your words flow out of your mouth like bubbles
    I want to be the water you shower with
    I want to taste your Lady Sweet
     
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    Ah-g.

    it almost feel like sex...


    /antar/peepin the seashores
     
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    oh this was nice
    likes the vibe
    flow on
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my i felt the X's and O's kissing
    this was tyte poetic flowing
    do yo thang
     
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    love that stanza...
    This piece has great
    imagery and movement
    feeling it totally...

    Encore :spinstar:
     
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    This was sweetly laid with a dash of spice in the blend.
     
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    groove in this flow
    wonderful drop
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    Pretty smooth- ain't too many people left who can capture this mood without going all overboard.. you wrap it up like it ain't nothing. Its on.

    JAH Love is ONE.
     
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