Black Poetry : LADY POET

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  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LADY POET

    I sit, and I listen … sitting north, facing south
    I hear the words that are coming out of the mouth –
    Of a Prolific Poetess as she crafts ingenious flows
    Brushing my cheek with a rhyme; holding my hand with lines of prose
    Her words have me open like the walls of a broken dam
    Her locution is sweeter than wheat toast with jelly and jam
    Her diction touch parts of me, of which no man denies
    At points the inclination of her words cause me to close my eyes
    I’m massaged by the voice of this spoken word vixen
    Pulled by the gravity of her oratory, Lady Poet is fixin’ –
    To concoct a cocktail of wit, satire and vulgar talk
    Which has me glued to my seat … unable to walk
    She moves with her poem with no cause for alarm
    Her syntax wrap around me like a hunters net, with the intent to disarm –
    My masked insecurities … my stern veneer and defensiveness
    To break me down with soft words, with intensive jest

    Her words resonate from within and without
    As I sit here, seduced by the words of the mouth –
    Of the Lady Poet who weaves her verbal thread
    With the carnal wit and wisdom that I can’t get out of my head
    Inflections of her voice leads to climax, crests and crescendo
    Verbs and adjectives that bounce from her tongue … incited innuendo
    From the lips of the Lady, her words find their way to my gut
    She strokes my spirit, makes love to my soul, and makes my mind bus’ a nut
    Floating on every verse, I levitate to another plane
    I’m like a heroine addict with the needle still in my vein
    I’m elated to the point to where, now, I’m enamored with this dame
    Worked by a Lady who would put others to shame
    She pulls out of me desire and lust, with her creative license
    She makes my heart skip a beat with lines punctuated in silence
    With verbal exclamation marks, I feel venerated
    Feeling as satisfied as though her vulva walls, I penetrated

    My mind goes places and mills about
    When I hear the words that are coming out of the mouth –
    Of a Lyrical Lovely that works her ways
    Leaving an imprint on my mind that stays for way more than just days
    But for weeks months and years with a poetic fabric that girds
    Stirring my mind to intercourse and f***ing me with her words
    She is the word witch who casts her spell
    I am her man b**ch, for hers are the incantations for which I fell
    Her rhyme her siren song which she sings very well
    Her meter and forum are perfect with words clear as a bell
    She gyrates with a metaphor and grinds with a hyperbole
    She makes love to me with an onomatopoeia and has sex with a simile
    Her allure is poetic … it causes my head to lean
    Her charisma is far from pathetic … pathetic by no means
    Her charm is authentic, and touches me to the core
    Her appeal is magnetic, and attracts me like iron ore

    I’m sprung to no end … without a doubt
    Bathed by the words coming from the mouth –
    Of a Poetic Diva whose words are sweeter than cider
    That weaves her words like the web of a black widow spider
    Before I knew it, I was caught in a snare of poetic disclosure
    Trying to pull away, I could not, but she got closer and closer
    And when she close enough to touch without seeing
    She injected me with her verbal venom and paralyzed my very being
    I’m eaten alive with every line and every syllable
    I’m consumed by her seductive speech, and like good soil, I’m tillable
    She has her way with me in deed and in name
    She provokes a conjugal response without touching my physical frame
    Mesmerized, I mentally ejaculate because she brought me to that place
    I twitch and I squirm, manifested by the look on my face
    She masterfully made me cum with seduction slow, not abrupt
    Speechless, and gathering my thoughts, her words really f***ed me up

    Written by: K-JiO
    © 2007
     
  2. watzinaname

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    Your words flowed with a slow hand of seduction. Whew...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feverishly taken control here flowhead
     
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    Polished delivery
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yea poet

    you opened it up and then took it back where you always go

    feeling this level
     
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    She recognized the power
    her poetic words fed
    even though you attempted to hid it
    she knew she had seduced you
    straight to her lyrical bed
    no caresses no kisses no tender lovin hugs
    just an aggresive and rigorous flow
    of pronouns, nouns, adjectives,and verbs
    the only thing running
    through your mind was...
    This Lady Poet has some kinda skills
    to **** me up
    With just mere words


    g-salt:
    I guess I do not have to tell you
    that I really liked that joint!!!
    Reading it made me feel like you.
    Did I confuse you?:)

    Its always a pleasure to read you.
     
  7. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    4EverLuv, it's always nice to be read :)
     
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