Black Poetry : Lady Poet (verse 3 of 4)

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  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LADY POET

    My mind goes places and mills about
    When I hear the words that are coming out of the mouth –
    Of a Lyrical Lovely that works her ways
    Leaving an imprint on my mind that stays for way more than just days
    But for weeks months and years with a poetic fabric that girds
    Stirring my mind to intercourse and ******* me with her words
    She is the word witch who casts her spell
    I am her man *****, for hers are the incantations for which I fell
    Her rhyme her siren song which she sings very well
    Her meter and forum are perfect with words clear as a bell
    She gyrates with a metaphor and grinds with a hyperbole
    She makes love to me with an onomatopoeia and has sex with a simile
    Her allure is poetic … it causes my head to lean
    Her charisma is far from pathetic … pathetic by no means
    Her charm is authentic, and touches me to the core
    Her appeal is magnetic, and attracts me like iron ore

    Written by: K-JiO
    © 2007
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man i surely can relate i've been pulled to magnetic forces ...whewww!

    keep dropping {Lady Poet} on us to feel da effects of her poetic power
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The two of you make a pefect match, for you encompass all those qualities in your poetry as well. Awesome scribe poet.
     
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