Black Poetry : Lady pen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Passionfruit005, Nov 24, 2005.

  1. Passionfruit005

    Passionfruit005 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 17, 2005
    Messages:
    59
    Likes Received:
    4
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +4
    Lady pen

    inspires me
    she inspires me from the heart
    her words move me.
    ... inspires me ....
    in me creates envy
    , for it is her i want to emulate,
    her i want to mold myself after
    take the dirt and the clay, hand shape something beautiful from her
    as my gift to her
    press my very soul against the lines in her heart leaving thin marks of
    grit and grain symbolizing my love for her
    or possibly even just
    ...press the keys on the
    .... board into submission
    till they form just the right words on her screen
    .......of wisdom
    my fingertips dance with the imprints as if Braille and i can't see
    cuz sometimes it is
    ...her i can't see, but only to be felt
    with the jealousy, the grows inside of me when
    someone else gets the best of her
    .... but pushes me
    to take advantage of the many way her
    ................... words....
    ......bend in flexibility ....
    and twist in the direction i decide, reminding me
    that language is a potent thing, and that
    ... a peach is a peach
    and a durazno is a peach, unless it is a peace.........
    but none of that matters with her,
    the connector and connection of all languages
    breaking all barriers yet varies in every region
    i reach to her, cuz in any culture
    ....... i would recognize her
    i would bayini in any language
    (i would recognize) her
    Poetry- words from the pen
    Poesi'a-palabras de la pluma
    Poesia-parole dalla penna
    my recognition of her, but it doesn't matter
    cuz the nectar of her fruit revives love
    in every nation, the same
    and it Inspires me
    inspires me from the heart
    that everyone posses a piece of my
    lady pen
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    wow !!!!! awesome
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the house of peace and respect
    welcome to the family of love as we bond poeticly
    welcome Passionfruit005
     
  3. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 19, 2005
    Messages:
    3,872
    Likes Received:
    134
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    working to own my plus size empire.....
    Location:
    I'm a Georgia Peach!!!!
    Ratings:
    +135
    this was very good piece flow on poet. and most welcome from the ga peach.
     
  4. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Oct 26, 2005
    Messages:
    2,965
    Likes Received:
    11
    Occupation:
    Pos Technical Support
    Location:
    Windy City
    Ratings:
    +12
    beautiful piece passion
    tank you for sharing
    I loved it
     
  5. Passionfruit005

    Passionfruit005 Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 17, 2005
    Messages:
    59
    Likes Received:
    4
    Gender:
    Female
    Ratings:
    +4
    Thanks much for showin mad luv, really appreciate it
    holla back passion
     
  6. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 21, 2005
    Messages:
    4,201
    Likes Received:
    118
    Ratings:
    +118
    touching...............inspirational, keep us on our toes, Passion:picture:
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Eloquently posed, thoroughly enjoyable. Your pen is aflame. Welcome to Destee. Awaiting more from you.
     
  8. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2004
    Messages:
    1,008
    Likes Received:
    35
    Ratings:
    +35
    :huh:


    i clap .....



    and please write some more....


    this is beautifull...






    i like that ''lady pen"':rolleyes:











    loveauroraflower:heart:
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2001
    Messages:
    7,648
    Likes Received:
    40
    Occupation:
    thrivin' spiritually/physically/emotionally/financ
    Location:
    where failure is not an option
    Ratings:
    +42
    UM I LOVE POETRY
    AND THIS HERE WAS POETRY FOR REAL POETRY

    LOVE THE SPIRIT OF POETRY HERE THAT YOU PROJECTED

    WELCOME POET
     
  10. bigdrizzle

    bigdrizzle Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Aug 19, 2004
    Messages:
    424
    Likes Received:
    4
    Location:
    within N.Y. State of Mind
    Ratings:
    +4
    what a wonderful scribe...hope ya lady pen never runs out of ink..keep flowin, poet

    Peace,
    Drizz
     
Loading...
Similar Threads - Lady
  1. Liberty
    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    55
  2. AACOOLDRE
    Replies:
    2
    Views:
    107
  3. Liberty
    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    201
  4. 1poetsought

    Black Entertainment : Electric Lady

    Replies:
    0
    Views:
    297
  5. Bishop
    Replies:
    2
    Views:
    343