Black Poetry : Lady in Love (for Blakverb)

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Look at me,
    I can smile for you
    and tilt my head ~
    I drink your rushing
    words with my eager mouth
    swallowing your every sentence
    and I paint my lips for you
    a fragrant red,
    I even trace your brows with tutored
    finger tips
    When you rehearse your list of
    loves to me...

    How I laugh and marvel
    rapturous-eyed ~ as you laugh back
    but you could never see
    the ten thousand deaths
    my heart has died...
    Yet you believe so well
    that I know my part ~
    ...that I am happy as a toddler
    playing in light snow...
    But all the stressing things
    within my heart
    You will never know...

    I laugh and listen
    when we meet ~
    As you bring your tales
    of fresh adventurings --
    Of times you've been
    indiscreet ~
    -- of lingering hands
    and gently whispered things

    And you are pleased with me ~
    Singing me sagas of your life's
    delights...
    Do you want me?? -- Marveling,
    happy, and true?
    You don't see my staring eyes
    of nights
    when in search of novelties
    you stray ~
    I kiss you blithely as you go...

    And what goes on
    while you're away
    You'll never even know...


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa Nelly! Stop the presses! The ink that floweth here can be sipped with a mental straw to enjoy every word.

    one love,blak
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sip the 'T'.....

    for as long as you need...and feel free to invite Ruth!
    Cause this one definitely is for you!

    Thanks much for the love!! :kiss:
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2....

    i wanted to hit this one earlier... but i decided
    to wait for Verb to reply first...

    it is truly beautiful... heart-warming & felt! :)

    Peace&Love...
    SunShyne~
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You GA

    Girl thank ya' - thank ya'! I appreciate you letting Blak hit this one up first too... good lookin' out! Glad you like the sentimental side of N2~

    Peace my sista...
     
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