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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As forth thou lovely woman
    spills to stoop and folly
    yet to see the unleash of men
    dismay and betrayal comes late
    when charm can sooth thee
    melancholy, sought art washies
    her guilt away and avoid cover
    thee hidden shame under eye
    to give repentance of her love
    her voice sings harmonies songz
    as da harp stilt un-played musical
    mo bitter blues lingers
    forth the loveth calling still
    as the galloping wings whispers
    to love me again.
     
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    Rich, this is a very nice poem.
    Happy New year!
     
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    The imagery in this piece captured me, melancholy, yet a ray of light appears. We have to know that there is always light at the end of the tunnel. Happy New Year Rich!
     
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    Thankz poetrymama and Happy New Year to you as well.

    Thankz watz i think there is a light at the end if i could only see
    my way through and Happy New year to u as well baby..........
     
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    You stirred the pot with this one here bro. It was mellow smooth.:great: :welldone:
     
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    big thankz robboy
     
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