Black Poetry : ...Ladies...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Aug 12, 2005.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladies let me tell you when you have a good man
    Hold on to him and grasp firmly to his hands
    Don’t mistreat him, no matter how bad
    You wanna mess around and do the bad
    Cuz when it seemed like some nights he wasn’t there
    You’re gonna look back and see he only cared
    To wipe away the tears and make you feel loved
    You’ll enjoy the feeling, but don’t leave in search of
    If you’re looking for something else you wont find it
    Because the only thing you need is God as your guidance
    And God sent a good man to keep you happy
    But not all of you wll be blessed to have him still be
    There when you stray and there when you come
    So sensitive that your tears are like his own
    He needs time to heal, but he ain’t gone
    So don’t go cheatin’ thinkin it’s a game you just won
    Cuz the feeling will loose extremely to your guilt
    And I’m thankful God’s persuaded he love me still
    Its sad to say it took me so [email protected] long
    To realize that he is the only true one
    Been such a long time since I felt this type of love
    I pray to God to strengthen me by his shed blood
    I’m changing and Lord knows I can feel it
    Too bad I went through so much hell to reveal it
    I pray that one day my love will forgive me
    Hard enough to forgive myself for sins I’ve revealed lately
    So Ladies when you have good, loving man
    Hold on to him and never let go of his hands…
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honesty...is the most beautiful expression of love
    the sentiment of this piece can be felt so strongly
    I think it can be said, that too often we take
    for granted the loved ones in our lives
    whether it's our man or woman, parent, child or friend
    this was a thought provoking piece...

    Thanks for sharing it with us...
    Sage
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true indeed and i alwayz say love the one u with !
    this was a ture deep release from within da heart.
     
  4. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the comments angelicsage and rich:)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, Lord, when you have what is golden, treat it like it is precious, because it is. I felt your heart in this poet, very touching piece.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes we must go through the storm and we will be alright ... know God only bring you through to prepare you for something much better and stronger ...all things happen for a reason and by his grace....

    I enjoyed this poem alot thanks for sharing a part of you with us

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!!!LovelyGoldeOne...

    I could feel the energy you've spoke in this written word. If is so unfortunate that we do sometimes take our love ones for granted, just to be on a search to look for love in all the wrong places. Well... I guess it's like the saying goes... "you never miss a good thing til it's gone"

    Thanks for bring it home!
     
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    mzpoetic8705 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is true, but who's to say if this is a "good man"....what may appear to be GOOD may not be so great...lol...but i love your poem....very dif. from the norms (e.g. women dogging men out)...good flow
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes golden sis...



    this was beautifull


    aww i,m sooooo happy for you :flowers:





    yes i will...




    when it will come on my path....

    i will....





    i always have...



    i will always continue to love...





    even in bad times ...


    if the love is real .......yes...








    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for all the comments everybody:) i really appreciate it...
     
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