Black Poetry : Ladies Do Ya feel me?

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  1. MsGhettoPoet

    MsGhettoPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladies do ya feel me? Halla if u hear me...

    Y do da brothas try 2play us like we're dumb?
    Spittin game 2us w/lies hotta than the sun
    Lemme tell u rite now boy, i aint da one
    Always tellin us how their cars drive fast
    How they keep a money stash
    How they roll deep n da club
    Buyin bottles of Bub
    How they got Bling Bling
    And all those fancy things
    How they chains hang low
    N they dont mess wit h03s
    Thats not real, c'mon brotha be true
    Cuz the 1st thing u tryna do is screw
    N if i juss happen to agree
    Tell me brotha, wut would i be??
    The next thing u'll do is get on da fone
    N tell ur boys u got up wit a h03
    That contradicts wut u juss said b4

    Ladies do ya feel me? Halla if ya hear me...

    Brothas want us 2have a job n a crib
    Real hair, real nails, n a car wit rims
    But when we're independant, yall skurrd to halla
    Yall dont want real women, Yall want the 1's worth a dolla
    When we have our cribs n we have our cars
    N we got our jobs makin more dough than yall
    Tha names start cummin n we get called
    Stuck up n conceited
    But n reality, u really feel defeated
    Intimidated by our strength
    Confused by our pride
    Entranced by our physical appearance n stride
    And how we can be so powerful n bold
    But at the same time have a heart of gold and a warm soul
    Brotha Brotha all the blame aint on you
    Cuz us women, we have our dirt too
    Yall juss try to have ur cake n eat it too
    Ur sweet wit ya words, ur rap is superb
    U flip our thoughts like people flippin da bird
    Then talk crazy to us like u done lost ur dang nerve
    My brothas I luv yall
    And I always will
    I juss wanted u to realize, How we sumtimes feel......

    Ladies do ya feel me? Halla if ya hear me...
     
  2. Zen Master_1

    Zen Master_1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear you

    MsGhettoPoet, First off please accept my apology for I am not a sister, but having the art of "Girl-Talk," gives me the compassion needed to see life from many different levels. In fact, my oldest sister and her girlfriends was saying the same thing back in the old days of the 60's, myself I was just a nosy kid then, but I do understand what you are saying and it does take a lot of guts to bring out the monsters in your world. Most important of it all the courage not to be played like a second-classed shoe. Continue with your quest and thanks.
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

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    i feel u girl...this is tyte...
     
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    nice write...
     
  5. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you preach sister! i don't think they heard you!
     
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    deep reality check flowin here
    me being a brutha i better run !!!

    tyte sistah speak and make dis point heard
     
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    Sister, I feel U on this, BUT, Being a brother, I have 2 speak up on this.

    The dudes that U speak of aren't brothers, but (forgive me 4 using this word) ******.

    Yes, there is definitely a difference.

    Just like everyone with brown skin aren't black, cuz U have colored people, those are the Uncle Toms, Condoleeza Rices, U know, the black people that want 2 be white.

    Every black man isn't a brother and every black woman isn't a sister.

    It's terrible 4 me 2 say it, but it's true.

    Brothers don't lie about what they have, or brag about what they drive, or how much money they've got, & they definitely don't call their friends on the phone 2 tell them about their most recent sexcapade.

    Boys (******) do.

    Other than that small disagreement with that, your piece is definitely on point, cuz I used 2 be one of those ****** always tryin 2 holler, keepin a book of all my pops with stars next 2 the good ones.
     
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    my sister you are balling on this poetic flow..i am hearing you on this
    HALLA HALLA
    nice drop sis
    Peace
     
  9. MsGhettoPoet

    MsGhettoPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well maybe i need to find me a black manand leave dem n1gg@$ alone!!! lol, thanx for givin ur views on this poem erry1!!
    i have a question tho, as positivemindset was sayin, erry black man isnt a brotha n every black woman isnt a sister.......he used the word n!gg@....so wut would a black woman thats NOT a sista be???????
     
  10. krazelyricks

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    I feel ya on this.......especially the first verse........I've always had these thoughts but didn't know how to say it on the paper......what can I say YOU SAID IT SUPERBLY......this was tyte........now if only some of tha brothers would read this and do right........nice......I'm feelin this.....
     
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