Black Poetry : Labyrinth to an Unreachable heart

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  1. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pt.2 of the ramblins of a confused heart series. this poem contains lyrics from janet jackson's 'i want u'

    'Feel like things r goin
    And then there gone
    Ur like a maze, I cant get through
    Should I go left?
    Should I go right?'

    Where did all my...
    'I love u' and 'I miss u's get me?
    Nowhere.
    Cuz I'm still stuck in the same spot.
    Searchin 4 a love that was never really there.

    'Feel like things r goin
    And then there gone
    Ur like a maze, I cant get through
    Should I go left?
    Should I go right?

    I'll sidestep this issue n act like i never met u.
    I'll act like my heart never loved u.
    I'll act like I wasnt happy 2 b around u, when i really needed someone.
    I'll act like I just dont care.

    'Feel like things r goin
    And then there gone
    Ur like a maze, I cant get through
    Should I go left?
    Should I go right?
    Should I let u stay 4 the night?'

    U were 2 yrs older than me.
    We used to chill to the wee hrs of the mornin.
    Used to act a fool around eachother.
    There was a vibe that we both couldnt deny.
    It's better to have loved n lost, then to never love at all.
    I didnt really lose, I just got 1/2 a heart.

    'Feel like things r goin
    And then there gone
    Ur like a maze, I cant get through
    Should I go left?
    Should I go right?
    Should I let u stay 4 the night?'

    Hold up...rewind...

    Feel like things r goin
    And there gone
    Ur like a maze, I cant get through
    Should I go left?
    Should I go right?
    Do I really want u in my life?


    Copyright 2004
     
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    tight flow that you posed...I like the xcerpts of the song in there:)
     
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    this ring out smoothly tyte drop
    loving the tunes of it
     
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    Uncertainty is like this. Liked the way you laid this down.
     
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    thanx for all the love fam... sometimes it b like this.lol .much love 2 all.
     
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    For sarcasm4eva's eyes

    Love scribed on a tree, inked on pressed pulp
    Love presented in a tall glass, down it by gulp
    Your magnificent poem walked most elegantly
    Up the street called sublime, moving extravagantly
    Upon my mind, I read each word, I wasted no time


    Great poem
    Seize the day!​
     
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