Quiet Poetry Lounge : Labored Love

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Forth i stoof in da bliss
    and was captured by your present
    da warm embrace of your essence
    stole my heart and my love
    later to find myself laboring
    becoming da force of limbo park
    waving in da dark of night
    searching for thee that's not in sight

    Beyond da drunken maze of sexuality
    pores open a liquid vent
    my love struggle to find openings
    i cuddle my mental thoughts of u
    stilt it's beauty within i glance to see
    only a whip and tongue lash , beaten
    laboring in da spoof of what is
    my only way is out for i've grown
    ole , weary and tired

    My hands display blisters
    my feet numb as frosten bites
    strip of my love as it labor in your helms
    i can't see past morrow
    soon i fall into my slumber and dreameth
    my nightengal riding on lace'd & hope
    and i awaken to not find u their again
    must i labor so as my love cry in vain
    another night alone my bed become cold .
    :missu:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To give of yourself, to let your love cry out, to the point of being immersed in it, yet, not be heard, or felt, causes an ache that penetrates one's soul. Believe me, I know. Potent piece.
     
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    it's a place we surely don't wanna be and a feeling we can't bare !
    thankz for da view and reply sista Watz
     
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