Black Poetry : LABOR PAIN

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Nov 19, 2009.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Work load on a daily base
    fill wit pain upon millions face
    penny pay on da end
    all endure set in a trend

    Doing something everyone can do
    nobody did it job never through
    hired help sadly crew
    issues abound da boss blew

    handz tired legs weak
    mind on a standstill eyez blink
    theirs no people treat
    only da habor of another days stink

    Like a deck of cards odds all stacked
    morrow's future mentally lack
    da ova seers full of smack
    labor pain yes daily on attack

    At the end i just tip my hat and scat :run:
     
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    Scrupulous Poet Member MEMBER

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    I like this flow. what is the meaning behind the pseudonym "RICH" ?
     
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    After a long week and a mentally mindset of thinking this what came out !
    Thank you for the visit and read , I guess you can say from all what the body
    mind and soul had to endure after a week work load it came down to me giving
    it a long hard looking into......At the end i goes home worn/torn and beat but
    live to see another day.

    Again thankz
     
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